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The Promise

The Promise Since the women left Toilets are blocked, men pee Into kitchen sinks. Pot plants on sills have died And gay blades live in fear of rape Shops have shut their doors Men sit in bars and sulk When not shooting holes in the sky If the women only will return We will promise the world But only after they have cleaned up Our clutter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/30/2013 11:35:00 AM
Yeah... it's a tough life... Terry
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 4/30/2013 12:08:00 PM
yes it is hard to be aman
Date: 4/30/2013 7:03:00 AM
There will be no sweet talking to me and no more quiche.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 4/30/2013 7:05:00 AM
ok I will remember that
Date: 4/30/2013 6:22:00 AM
Very nice piece. Enjoyed the poem. Great write.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 4/30/2013 7:05:00 AM
thank you Matthew

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