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The Process

I stand cold and sterile, almost medical Like a cadavar or a mannequin A sea of moons eclipsing periodically They look like beads, floating on a sea of plates Why are people so white in a glare when naturally They're so dull and grey like so much ash? Light is a liar. Light is deceptive. Under such a tide of it I must look virginal I am stripped and sink into the sickness I feel welling deep within me Like porcelein, I am naked Surrounding myself with a case of words All of them written in my childish handwriting Like some form of finger-painting made by lonesome lepers for the blind Awaiting critique as I slowly drown We do what we must do And écorché ourselves in the process.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2009 2:01:00 PM
PS we definitely DO need to be published =]
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:59:00 PM
Perfect. I love every image you evoke to get your point across... the ending left me seriously breathless (although I admit, I had to look up ecorche). Every line is amazingly potent and raw... just beautiful, Nathaniel. =] and I just recently got my laptop back in working order as well (after all my files and documents were erased ={ ) so don't feel bad, lol.
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:18:00 PM
Very compelling thoughts about the deceptive quality of glaring light. In this type of light we must all appear "stripped," exposed to the world as we await critique. Insightful images and a deep message in a well-penned poem, Nathaniel! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2009 12:43:00 PM
stunning..almost too clear...I have a verse by the same title..totall different subject. Loved this line "Like some form of finger-painting made by lonesome lepers for the blind Awaiting critique as I slowly drown" Light & Love
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