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The Problem With Your Poems

The problem with your poems is You’re one of many whizzes Who are sitting on a hoard of brilliant gems obscured; For we can not read them all Nor the crop on Fall; Thus they’ll gather dust But write them, ‘cause you must!

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2022 4:07:00 PM

Hannah, this poem is cream of the crop so glad I popped by today, Ive not been active on soup lately am hoping my muse is back now:-) hugs Jan xx

Hannah Borke
Date: 6/10/2022 9:00:00 AM

Thanks. If people wouldn’t have to work for a living or filled up on whatever mundane tasks, more poems would get read.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2019 1:01:00 PM

I guess that perhaps this s a better problem to have than a bevy of 'sluggish' poems. LOL. Interesting ink, methinks! :) gw

Hannah Borke
Date: 6/10/2022 9:00:00 AM

Thanks.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2019 3:03:00 PM

That is a problem. Well penned, Hannah.

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/10/2019 3:44:00 PM

It’s completely unfair. Every other type of talent gets due fuss. (This topic excludes me, because I’m not a poet.)

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 1:26:00 PM

This is really good... Enjoyed your satirical write..

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/10/2019 1:36:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Satire not intended. So much great poetry, we can hardly scratch the surface.