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The Princess and the Sacred Spring

The Princess and the Sacred Spring A spring beside the Castle of a kindly King, Is blessed and used to heal the sick, weak, and distressed. His sweet daughter ministers this miracle retreat, And light from beacon tower leads them to the site… The old, and young, school children, babies join the fold. She implores the strength from this holy spring and pours The source that feeds her Princess power as the force For healing, not through intelligence, but deep feeling Of glow within…her shining gem from sacred flow. © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~NA~ Contest: Plucky Two By Nine Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 04/30/2015
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rules: 2nd and 9th words of each line must rhyme poem must include these words: king, blessed, retreat, light, school, strength, princess, intelligence, gem

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Date: 2/3/2015 9:28:00 PM
A well said story... the scenes unfold without effort.. best wishes.. nad!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2015 8:26:00 PM
Hi Nadiya, thank you so much for your supportive comment and best wishes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 8:56:00 PM
Good story, good poem. It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish. Its inspirational and entertaining all in one. Emile.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Emile. It was a challenge using those rules! Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 8:05:00 PM
Good spiritual write, Sandra. Good luck in the contest. Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2015 8:36:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 6:49:00 PM
gosh, I hope you did it. I saw that contest briefly and it looked so complicated to me. Way to GO. I hope it's a winner for you.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 7:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Yes, it was challenging but fun. Thanks for stopping by! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 3:36:00 PM
Great write Sandra - it is such a tricky challenge! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You did wonderfully on yours! Yes, it took me a while to write it for sure. Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra

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