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The Prince of Pomposity

the beast detests the prince of pomposity. the chin upturned. each blackened strand of hair in place with grease. his too white smile released to aproned maids — the town with hordes of them. his shoulders straight, his swagger thrills his mates. they clink the loving cup — the weight of gold. the prince delivers speech, to kill the beast. the mirror grins and chases him outside. she holds the hand of Belle - who breaks the spell, preferring horn-y beasts to boastful toads. as castle servants change into their skin, they dance in conga line and imitate the swaggering and pompous prince who splits. now he’s the village idiot you see. 8/28/2019 SWAGGER Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Blank verse with 10 syllables except for first line with 11 and feminine ending

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Date: 9/7/2019 10:14:00 PM
Love how you ended this one. Congrats on your win in the contest, Kim! Best always, Gershon
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Date: 9/7/2019 8:15:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2019 10:40:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
Date: 8/30/2019 6:28:00 PM
Such an imaginative retelling, the last line brings it home!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2019 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 8/29/2019 12:38:00 PM
"she holds the hand of Belle - who breaks the spell, preferring horn-y beasts to boastful toads." - Beauty and the Beast in poetry form. Gorgeous Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed and instead of Gaston dying he becomes the village idiot...lol
Date: 8/29/2019 7:15:00 AM
This brings a smile, he underwent quite a transformation. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Richard!

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