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The Pretence of Money

The Pretence Of Money Money buy's all you want Fancy dresses with matching shoes Flashy cars for all to see A cosy home to lazy in.                                                               A lov-er of your dreams A bunch of friends to celebrate with The stories told are so sweet And adventures taken are a treat   Your are convinced of ha-ppi-ness But Something within is gone astay With all the possessions  all the crowds                                                       Still the soul feels so foul Eternal joy has no price Something you just re-a-lised   The misery is masked With a smile in it's place And tears fall behind closed doors                                                 The loud laughs                                        covers the pain And items bought heals the sorrow The bonds made are falsely hollow So voices within questions tomorrow   How lucky you are, people say So count your blessing's as you pray The bed you made  is were lay A comfort worth it                                                     so you stay With an empty soul you act brave A truth untold for-ever a slave So money's pretence becomes your grave   By H.F. Written: 06/09/2011

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Date: 1/7/2012 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for this lovely poem. It is something we can all learn from. Excellent style and very very well written. I see from the other comments that you are new here. WELCOME! :D Always, Laura
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/7/2012 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much. I have been writting for a while now so I thought I'd share it with the world. There is nothing more important than the encouragement of people, especially fellow poets. Thank you, appreciate it, Hussein
Date: 1/6/2012 6:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup enjoyed your lovely poem, very true money can't buy you love or happiness, Happy New Year Elizabeth
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/7/2012 7:42:00 PM
Very true Elizabeth, Happy New Year, Hussein
Date: 1/6/2012 12:43:00 PM
Money is the root of all evil!! Money is NOT love and happiness. OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/6/2012 3:44:00 PM
Very true, but most aren't aware or pretend untill it is too late. Thank you Anne.
Date: 1/6/2012 7:41:00 AM
Oh so true a prison a stronghold when one is overcome by anything- well done, Thank you for sharing your gift, Brenda : )
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/6/2012 3:43:00 PM
Thank you brenda. : )

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