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The Precious Home

My home is where I am truly free My home has the precious family My home is a simple vinyl structure with large oaks and flowering beds. Shady lawn to play and work. My evenings to enjoy. My home would not be a home without the spice of life, my loves, my family. Thanks be to the One who created the world and made the way of salvation. He gave the precious family. My home is a haven for bluebirds and nature. My home is peaceful, I can assure! **For the Applaud contest by Rick Parise

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Date: 8/5/2010 6:37:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to your home and family, Doris! And thank you for commenting "Pacific Ocean". Sometimes I am really missing the noise and smell of the Pacific having lived close for some years. And best of luck in the contest!...Gert
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:24:00 AM
What a really touching poem. i loved the way you ended it. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:34:00 PM
How beautiful and relaxing Doris ! Wonderful poem ! O if you only knew how much I needed this ever so trnquill poem to relieve the recent stresses of my days from my work ! TY kindly for this one ! james
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:44:00 PM
Dear Doris, Thank-YOU for inviting me to YOUR Home Such Serenity and Pease Superb POETIC ARTISTRY I just Wrote to YOUR MOM I Hope this Finds YOU and YOURS in Good Health, Prosperous, and in the Spirit Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS...HG -- I would Wish YOU Luck in the Applaude Contest Instead: Congratulations I could Feel The LOVE and Warmth Of YOUR Home YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 8/3/2010 1:42:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent praise write..Mom
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:04:00 AM
Awesome poem of gratitude Doris.. Thank you for your kind comments, always Wilma
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:43:00 AM
A wonderful poem, thank you for your comment! love SimoneX
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:37:00 PM
A nice thoughts well expressed on My home is where I am free and has the precious family, Doris
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:29:00 PM
Home is where the heart is....and this says it well !!! :)
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:06:00 PM
A wonderful poem of gratitude.......
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:00:00 PM
A nice applaud for your home sweet home, your poem brought them words to life enjoyed Doris,..p.d.
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Date: 8/2/2010 2:55:00 PM
Made me smile and warm inside, thank you. always Michael
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Date: 8/2/2010 2:07:00 PM
A poem of gratitude and love .Home is where the heart is , so nice Doris, I truly enjoyed~Thank you,God bless Rick
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Date: 8/2/2010 11:40:00 AM
Perfect write Doris.. so warm and gracious .. brings much to mind to be thankful for and enjoy our precious families.. mine is such to me also.. very creative and enjoyable read today..with luv..
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Date: 8/2/2010 11:00:00 AM
What a beauty of peace and love with the music and bluebirds and colors of nature. Very lovely description of your sweet home my friend. Great write and lovely home. My good wishes for the contest. Love and best wishes....Ravindra........Doris Culver..
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:53:00 AM
Your home sounds lovely Doris, relaxing, peaceful and happy. Made me smile as I read. Best wishes in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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