Get Your Premium Membership

The power of the words said on sight of you

'You are right' I wrote Meaningless and ignored Just about a NY Times game But what about 'Hi, I'm home'? I miss pleasantries out all the time It could be the way I've done something Maybe years in the making And subtly my fault The dog is new (ish) He only knows this version of me The one that announces my arrival Greetings are funny anyway I like to skip them, maybe I said that? I've a habit of skipping them on Reception But I did say 'good morning' on Friday I'm all proud of myself when I do :) And I was greeted back, with a song! S sang 'good morning to you' Less Marilyn, more birthday party But I replied 'what a treat' Smiled up the stairs She's tried for years to teach me I feel my reward has embedded my learning I'm a convert, probably It's all a bit weird being empty or full Just depending on words said on the sight of you Or the lack of words on the sight of you Or the close down of words as you're saying them I'm sick to my stomach But the dog is here And I'll ask him how lovely his ears are Enquire just how cute he is And think about it some more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/11/2024 12:53:00 PM
You did it again. I got a lot out of this poem. It was amazing.
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/13/2024 1:24:00 AM
I'm pleased to hear it Hilda, thank you :)
Date: 2/11/2024 4:58:00 AM
One good morning is enough ! One for everyone, they cant have one each. That should be what they teach. Definitely required is an "I'm leaving now", and an "I am home" Fundamental pleasantry ! Love your poem D, I can so relate. Makes sense in every level. The NOW version is what they ALL should know, even the pooch who will love you no matter how you change. Great poem !
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/11/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thanks Wen, I don't feel quite as dramatic reading it back. Haha :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things