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The Poor's Exit Door

The Poor's Exit Door The sign is painted red, but what does it mean? Probably the exact opposite, of what is painted green. Maybe that is only in the traffic lights flashing. Or the signs about direction, green enters as reds exiting. It doesn't matter which way you go in through the out door. No matter where you find yourself, people will always look for more. So you better beware of just, what it is you have in store. The poor feed the rich, and the poor feed the poor... Bmdavey@ 03/19/16

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Date: 5/6/2016 7:46:00 PM
Just checked and saw I had not even added you to my fave poet list. Good grief. now it's done!! (by the way, those last two lines in this poem are AMAZING and so TRUE)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/8/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I am so excited that you like my poems enough to be on your favorite poet list, likewise you are on mine of course! have a wonderful evening
Date: 3/22/2016 5:31:00 AM
ADDING THIS TO MY FAV LIST. So reminds me of what my father said often back in the 60's. " THE RICH JUST KEEP ON GETTING RICHER, WHILE THE POOR KEEP ON GETTING POORER." A7
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/22/2016 8:21:00 PM
Wow I am honored to make your favs list and am happy to hear that we share like views on this subject, thanks for reading
Date: 3/20/2016 3:42:00 PM
written with such depth and keen observation of life, brian... greeat work!..huggs
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/22/2016 8:20:00 PM
thank you Nette I do try to be observant and aware of how fortunate or unfortunate the people are around me, thanks for reading

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