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The Poor Man

Saturday Night in the township of Zithobeni the poor man screaming again beging for his life. The poor man love larking,but this time he was attacked by hyenas filled with anger and ego to split blood like vampires. The poor man was assaulted verbally. Through the window I saw the whole incident,the poor man is lying in the pool of blood and,his flesh is torn apart like ripped jeans.

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Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:16:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Thabo. :)

Thabo Godfrey
Date: 3/10/2017 4:14:00 AM

Thank you

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thabo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thaboo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Thabo Godfrey
Date: 9/26/2016 5:13:00 AM

Cn i have ur email plz