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The Point of No Return

The police chief said, The sun don’t keep shining For little girls like you. What you saw back there was nothing. You hear? Nothing. But, it was something. My friend was dead. It was the point of no return. Heidi Sands 12/6/16 *Placed 5th in Contest: Point of No Return

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Date: 12/24/2016 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on a fine free verse poem Heidi!:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/24/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl! :)
Date: 12/15/2016 5:14:00 PM
Congrats!!! Heidi...well done...god bless...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/15/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 12/8/2016 11:18:00 AM
Very compelling poem, Heidi. No punches pulled w/this poem. I loved it. Of course, the circumstance and results w/tragic, but as a poem, it moved my needle, it touched my spirit in a good way. Loved the poem though. Love and peace to you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thank You Very much Freddie. Peace to you as well ! :)
Date: 12/6/2016 6:18:00 PM
Hi Heidi, Good take on the contest theme. I agree with Chris, you let emotions flow on this one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis :)
Date: 12/6/2016 5:13:00 PM
Wow, talk about disturbing and heart braking at the same time. Heidi, you really let your emotions flow in this one. This might just win it all.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2016 5:18:00 PM
Not sure about that, but thanks Chris :)

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