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The Poetic Skies

I’m writing of my neighbor, Who sadly passed away. She planted the poetry seed, Of the poems you read today. A piece of me left with her, The day her casket closed. She spawned my poetic inception, For her, my work’s composed. It’s been eleven lonely years; Her poetic sun set, to never rise. I’m still in mourning far from setting, Illuminating the poetic skies. Her presence cast infectious beauty, But her life’s light untimely set. Leaving a wealth of memory, That my heart will never forget. Her poems speak forever, Reminding my tortured soul. Of their creator’s radiance, That sadly had to go. I’m up here with other stars; My poetic rays sting the eyes. It's my time of day to shine, And grace the poetic skies. ________________________________ For Chris' "Get Your Rebel On" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/21/2009 9:16:00 AM
wow!!! a truly beautiful poem!!!
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:28:00 AM
So very well written, lovely flow and rhythm. A beautiful tribute to someone that obviously had great impact on your life. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:39:00 PM
Love the title! This is a very touching tribute to someone who has made an impact in your life over the years. I am sure she is smiling down on from those marvelous heavens above.
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:47:00 PM
This is such a beautiful tribute, great write Raul -Jessica
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:26:00 PM
It's hard to forget someone who had such a tremendous influence on your life, Raul, even after 11 years. It was my high school journalism teacher who mentored me and he has been gone for just as long. Sorry you had to lose this woman, but her influence still shines in your work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:22:00 PM
awesome and i love the last stanza---charma
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Date: 6/6/2009 2:21:00 PM
Thanks for the support.
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Date: 6/6/2009 1:01:00 PM
Sheer class Raul>James
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Date: 6/6/2009 12:12:00 PM
Beautiful Raul! I love it when you write Quatrian Poems! This is your time to shine my friend! Nate
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