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You have read that one poem Over morning coffee luke warm Then there was another You read that one too I flaunted yet another in the cold Three in one day Seeking approval Or at least my words to have sway Yet Like a dying a flower Wilted Wrinkled from the inside out Floundering between reality and disillusions The crashing of the empty wine bottle on the floor Like the church bells in the village Announcing the words that seek to run away For many have read the poems As I have opened the garden gate My torment though marches on For I now know deep deep down in the depth Not a soul Has yet to read The poet The graveyard is not so deep

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Date: 4/18/2016 7:33:00 PM
When poets truly share heart, soul and do so to give it reads in their poetry and the reader is doubly blessed IMHO. YOU DO SO AND IT SHINES MY FRIEND. I myself know severaL dozen other poets here that write that way too. Likely many more here but I have not the time to read and discover them all. Keep on inking, as a poet its what you do--and do so well.
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD
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Date: 3/26/2016 10:11:00 PM
I might add, you may all wish to read this poem http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/i_wish_i_could_speak_in_french_770649#comments I myself loved it and it partly inspired this poem!
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on this POTD! Very insightful! Write on!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Walter!
Date: 3/26/2016 3:25:00 PM
Great work and congrats!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Jai! much appreciated!
Date: 3/26/2016 3:15:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Arthur - A powerful writing, well done ! - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, hope you are having a wonderful Happy Easter!
Date: 3/26/2016 2:42:00 PM
Hi Authur, It seems congratulations are in order. Wow! What a powerful write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day it was well deserved. Enjoy the honor- Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:10:00 PM
Hi Alexis! Thank you so much! Happy Easter!
Date: 3/26/2016 2:39:00 PM
Wonderful write Arthur.
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Date: 3/26/2016 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2016 1:40:00 PM
Arthur, a big CONGRATULATIONS on having this wonderful write selected as Poem of the Day, I knew it was special the first time I read it, enjoy the honor !
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Broken Wings! :)
Date: 3/26/2016 11:29:00 AM
Looks like I have another go at reading this, grats as poem of the day :) hugs
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Cas, always fun to have another go at it!
Date: 3/26/2016 10:06:00 AM
well then keep writing the seeds
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 3/26/2016 9:39:00 AM
First, Congratulations on POTD. I think most poets would like to know that someone reads what they write. It's like picking a bouquet of flowers, you simply can't pick them all. Love the write Arthur, peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 3/26/2016 8:12:00 AM
Might as well be mumbling in silence without being read into birth. Poetry must be shared to exist. To the point, your work gives life to itself as POTD, congratulations where's my cigar...
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:14:00 PM
:) Thank you
Date: 3/26/2016 6:20:00 AM
This truly is very good, Arthur. I was held captive from the immediate start right through to the final line - The signature mark of any superior poem! A worthy POTD...Congratulations. My best regards! :-) john
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:14:00 PM
Very kind of you John, many thanks!
Date: 3/26/2016 1:22:00 AM
What a wonderful thought and expressions in the words of the garland of a poem ..liked the spirit .
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 3/26/2016 12:19:00 AM
These could have been my words. xoxoxoxoxox peace and love
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2016 2:13:00 PM
Why Thank you! :)
Date: 3/25/2016 10:25:00 PM
This is so fresh and exciting, Arthur! What a creative way to express the frustrations of a poet whose works have not been read...brilliant!
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Date: 3/25/2016 10:42:00 PM
well I am pleased you liked it as you inspired it! I felt your words, and I think its human to want to be heard! So I am thrilled you liked it!!!
Date: 3/25/2016 8:15:00 PM
oh my , so dark and deep. I really like this one, ARthur.
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Date: 3/25/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you!!!!! :) Hugs
Date: 3/25/2016 6:09:00 PM
very good my friend you are so inviting to read your work :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/25/2016 7:08:00 PM
You are so kind Eve! Hugs!
Date: 3/25/2016 3:24:00 PM
Arthur , you are so good at your poetry....Outstanding!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/25/2016 5:33:00 PM
Coming from someone as talented as you, makes me smile from ear to ear!
Date: 3/25/2016 1:34:00 PM
You drew me in, kept me there, and now you make me want more! xx :)
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Date: 3/25/2016 5:33:00 PM
Wow, sure wish I could get more women to say that to me!!! Hugs!
Date: 3/25/2016 11:10:00 AM
Arthur, wow, this is amazing, you are one gifted poet, sad that poems written with such love, lay forgotten, we need only to look at our long list of poems to know the truth of your words, fantastic 7 ~
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Date: 3/25/2016 5:32:00 PM
Yes, I often think the same, and am just as guilty, so when I have time, every now and then, I try and read some of a poets older poems! Why I dont even look at my own older ones! :) On a positive note that is because there are so many new beautiful ones to read!!! Hugs!
Date: 3/25/2016 7:33:00 AM
I love it Arthur. Inspirational : )
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Date: 3/25/2016 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Tim, Laura inspired this, and when I see a beautiful wonderful poem here with no comments, as happens, well made me think of this, even I added a twist.
Date: 3/25/2016 7:01:00 AM
I'll be handing out shovels, keep breathing.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/25/2016 5:25:00 PM
LOL thanks! :)
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