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The Poesy of My Poetry

The Poesy of My Poetry An enchanted geometric cadence With an unpretentious pentameter Causes euphoric confusion By means of philanthropic lineage Outside of the way words sound Beyond phases sans their meanings From the free flowing vitality Inside of me To the cautious intrusiveness Inside of you. This is to be experienced From the dust we clean on To the spirit we lean For the cause we became for... Taste Accept Receive Me. 7/29/2015

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Date: 4/27/2016 11:53:00 AM
"From the free flowing vitality inside of me to the cautious intrusiveness inside of you" ... really loved the way you worded this. We all get little glimpses inside another poet's soul through our words, and at times it can feel rather intrusive. Some profound musing here, Hamilton.
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Date: 8/19/2015 6:20:00 PM
Deep but as I read it twice it does mirror beauty and the awesome indulgence in writing and relishing poetry.. a7~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:20:00 PM
Lovely Hamilton! U rock with this very unique take, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:26:00 PM
For sure, I can feel the free flowing vitality that is catching !! Loved this one !! Congratulations to you!!!
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Date: 8/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
J H.,, congratulations on your win, In Charlotte's contest... SKAT
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:47:00 PM
this was another most intriguing piece, very unique; I particularly liked the way you closed the poem - congrats on your win in my contest!
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