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The Poems I Never Wrote

~When "light upon yon window” aims to break into my hollow head by early dawn, such brilliant prose pours in as I awake but by the time I stretch those words are gone. And like two roads that ‘verged in yellow wood, some perfect metaphors have come my way, but in a blink, they're simply gone for good, and where they go, I truly cannot say. “How do I love thee”, surfaced in a dream with similes of everlasting charm, but in a flash, I lost the thread midstream so, “let me count the ways” soon bought the farm*. My brilliant works of art would just astound if I would merely write the damn words down. 10-6-22 Some of the credit for this poem goes out to my friends, Willie, Bob and Emmie, but most of it's mine... *Bought the farm is slang for pushin’ up daisies. Pushing up daisies is slang for takin’ a dirt nap. Takin’ a dirt nap is slang for … I think you get idea

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Date: 11/14/2022 12:23:00 AM
This happens for most of the poets, especially between sleep and waking. At times words come dancing before our mind but when we are about to trap them, they go winging away. A poem we all can relate , dear Mark !
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Date: 10/20/2022 10:21:00 AM
Just delightful Mark! And, filled with that experience of waking up to things that we want to remember but escape us when we are fully awake. Love the integration of poetic favorites. This is so creative and highlights your unique poetic style! Congratulations for your win. Blessings on your dreams. Here's to a pad and pen beside the bed!
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Date: 10/15/2022 12:32:00 PM
Your flow and rhythm is so elegant, I also have felt the frustration of losing that perfect line, congratulations on your win-
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Date: 10/15/2022 9:48:00 AM
Mark, great Sonnet and I loved the sense of humor, and congratulations on your win in Craig's contest, blessings Constance
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Date: 10/7/2022 6:14:00 AM
Hey, if I didn't have to pee first I'd be a published celebrity.....but nature call....
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Date: 10/6/2022 9:13:00 PM
...ah smilies....nice meta-for similes....... stans sand : )
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Date: 10/6/2022 8:06:00 PM
Love your theme Mark. Best wishes in the contest...
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/6/2022 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Michael, after reading yours, I think I may have over dressed for the party.
Date: 10/6/2022 7:04:00 PM
HA!! Got a giggle from me at the end... perfection!
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/6/2022 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Becky
Date: 10/6/2022 6:58:00 PM
That’s great, Mark. Enjoyed this one. There have been a lot of good ones written on this topic!
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/6/2022 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Jeff, your entry may take the prize!

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