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Written to mark the Pllatinum Jubilee of Queen Elizabeth II. Crowned as Monarch on 2 June 1952.
She has selflessly and tirelessly served her people for 70 years . 
It is hard to think of anyone who has devoted so much of her life to her people and of whom it could be said  :

Non nobis solum nati sumus
( Not for ourselves alone are we born)

 

Through seventy years of change, Orb and sceptre in your hands, Serving your people, young and old, You have reigned over these lands. To duty called when you were young, You took the oath in Edwards chair. The crown sits well upon that head That doth its precious weight still bear. A beacon to your people, To all your commonwealth, You show us what devotion means To something beyond self. Prime ministers and presidents Have graced your royal court Charities from every sphere Your patronage have sought. A mother and a grandmother, A loyal and loving wife. A Queen with whom the nation Shared the milestones of your life. You could not give us any more, You’re an example to us all. Of the meaning of self sacrifice That answer”s duty’s call. You too have suffered pain and loss, Part of life’s kaleidoscope. You empathise, you sympathise, You bring a nation hope. You’ve led us in remembrance At war’s sad and bitter loss, You’ve shed tears at the cenotaph, For the fallen and the lost. You truly are respected By every generation, For standing by your people, For fulfilling your vocation. Not for ourselves alone are we Born to this life we’re given You’ve shown us what can be achieved If we too are truly driven. You”re our pride and our identity Loved and held in great respect. History will remember you As our beloved “Lillibet.” We celebrate these seventy years, Your Platinum Jubilee. And I, for one, am glad to be, A subject of your majesty.

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Date: 5/2/2023 3:05:00 AM
Loved this one, MM. A good read. I did one called "Trooping the Colour", which you can find if you wish. This is one that takes the actual queeny stuff one step removed - but it's there, as you can see from the title. I've done one called "Obsequies for a Queen", too, at the time of her death. Again, one stop removed (told from the POV of three birds high in a building). I'm about to place one - Saturday - called "Coronation for a King". Three old aunts talk about it. But with respect.
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Date: 6/1/2022 8:00:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Queen Elizabeth. You probably will never have another who can measure up to her commitment and service. In the eighth line "it's" should be "its." I hope you don't mind this one simple correction. Thanks. Lovely poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/1/2022 12:32:00 PM
Oh thank you, Mike, for not taking offense. I make it a point to never do that, but you poem was sooooo marvelous I wanted it to be perfect. I think they ought to publish this in the London Times (or whatever it is called).
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Date: 6/1/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback ! Thanks too for the grammar correction ! As you say I doubt there will ever be another monarch who accepts the role into which she has been born and devotes herself so selflessly to it. An example for all of us to aspire too.

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