The Place We Call Home

a smile, beating hearts our feet moving without choice warm embrace, we’re home

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/19/2010 6:26:00 AM

In every embrace we find a home ... I am inspired by this. Lookout, it is a new poem for me now.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2010 8:27:00 AM

Isn't it wonderful to have a home filled with love! Terrific senryu, Wilma. I hope that smile never leaves your beautiful face. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 11/7/2010 7:02:00 AM

Aint no place like it. I like the feet moving - EXCITEMENT! You must love your home. Love, Dave

James Peranteau

Date: 11/7/2010 6:01:00 AM

Ahhhh....home...great write dear poet !!!! much love, james

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/7/2010 4:55:00 AM

Wilma ...........Home encompasses all gud feeling..... nice write. Thnx for visiting and commenting on my work, "Senate after spiritual awakening " ... Luv/bestwishes......Hitendra Mehta

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/7/2010 1:51:00 AM

my own feelings regarding home i see expressed in your verse.this is sweet,wilma

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/7/2010 12:56:00 AM

The simplicity of this Poem is the real beauty, which you have defined, in this matchless write on Home. You first and last lines are outstandingly beautiful. A great write my friend. Thank you for your Deewali Greetings and your comments on my Poem 'The Festival of Light'. Wish you also a Happy and Prosperous Deewali and the coming New Year. Love and best wishes.... Ravindra.....Wilma Neels