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The Pivot

he plants his right hind rocks back onto his haunches front crossing over he falls into his pivot with practiced ease and beauty October 29, 2012

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Date: 1/27/2013 2:13:00 PM
It's always nice to read a well expressed tanka poem, Tirzah, although one rarely sees one with a Western or Cowboy theme. Outstanding work! Carl.
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:58:00 PM
Tirzah, love the tanka.. good night~ PD
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