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The Pity Party

THE PITY PARTY The husband of a working woman Oh! Poor man Coming home to rooms so dusty Coming home to air so musty Coming home to sinks so rusty. The husband of a working woman Oh! Poor fella Arriving home to empty pots Arriving home to unmade cots Arriving home to loo with dots. The husband of a working woman Oh! Poor dude Wishing he could get very rich Wishing this home he could ditch Wishing another’s house he could pitch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 8:51:00 AM
Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7
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Lucy Wangari
Date: 4/29/2015 6:06:00 AM
lol, thanks, that's is from real life experience.

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