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The Pit of Her Stomach

She brushes her fingertips down her own skin and dreams of him rising like a tide inside her, his tongue between her teeth. She waits for the stars to fall ripe into her palms, and for the messiah. She waits, heart in mouth, for his breath against her bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 6:09:00 PM
this is beautiful you can still write super good poetry i love the way you make your words so vivid, hey i made a facebook if you want to contact me, heres my email pullinamatt247@hotmail.com
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:10:00 AM
Interesting write. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:36:00 PM
Very passionate, Micaela. Like the way she "dreams of him rising like a tide inside her." Right on the mark for those who long for their lovers. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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