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The Pinnacle Pines

Bold escarpments scrape the clear sky, rake and hoe the clouds day bright, plant your pointed pinnacle high, show man the way into the Light. Reflect upon the fractured form for all that is human is reborn.

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Date: 10/3/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:42:00 PM
Fine piece,Debbie.Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:34:00 AM
Well done, beautifully written. Take care, hope you are feeling better. Love Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Debbie
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:54:00 AM
Nice lines Debbie. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:07:00 AM
Debbie, don't like the word escarpment..used in poem...takes away from your poem's beauty...Smile...please find another word...rake and hoe...seems too brash in a discription of nature beauty. However, jolly good show...one's pointed pinnacle high...doesn't lie...shows the way into the light...and a fractured human form...allows the the soul to be reborn. Great summation in last four lines. Congratulations on a top three. Agape, Moses
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/1/2011 8:21:00 PM
ahhh we all have our own ways of thinking of things..I did think perhaps escarpment would be too much, but then again it's always nice to become MORE comfortable with complex words ;)
Date: 9/24/2011 9:39:00 PM
what great imagery, Deb. Is this for the current verse contest? Sure hope it does well, Nightie night! andrea
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:27:00 PM
Great and enjoyable work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:17:00 PM
rakin' and hoin' clouds... love the imagery, Deb! Happy eve, namaste~N
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