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The Pink Puzzle

Once was drinking Gelusil A liquid that aids digestion, effervescent in acidity Suddenly some amount spilt on the floor unnoticed A colony of black ants scurried up to lap the pink river All of them drank it full fledged to their hearts content And submerged into a pool of relief and pacification From Burping, Nausea and Gastro Esophagus Reflex Disease No more complaints and visits to the family doctor now So from then, intentionally spread Gelusil after meals To give a piece of serenity to my infinitesimal black pals. WRITTEN FOR THE MEMBER CONTEST TICKLE ME PINK SPONSORED BY LISA COOPER AND DARK POETESS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2016 6:01:00 PM
Gargi Saha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:03:00 PM
Gargi Saha, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:20:00 AM
I wonder if it nutralized their stingers? hehe!
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Date: 9/13/2012 5:26:00 AM
Like it - hope you win the contest - good luck! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Gargi Saha
Date: 9/14/2012 3:41:00 AM
Dear Ms Andresen, Thanks a lot for your kind words on my poem 'Pink Puzzle'.

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