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The Pink Lotus

The pink petals smile to the morning light Scatter in the muddy pond as the birth site Large slim leaves cover the stinky surface Where pink flowers transcend to free space What a wonderful life of the pink flowers The roots and bulbs nourished by dirty water The flowers whirl up and expose to the wind Then turn to a dozen tasty soft nuts therein Man's birthplace does not define the destiny The muddy stinky pond is the original family While the pink lotus gives beauty and perfume Rise to one’s feet to change the old costume!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/24/2021 11:52:00 AM
Love the look of this one.
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Date: 9/28/2020 8:15:00 AM
A very fine metaphorical piece! Perfectly set up for the finale.
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Date: 9/28/2020 12:51:00 AM
A great read! Reminding us how insignificant 'where we come from' is when compared to 'how we transform ourselves to offer our best to the world'. Ani
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Date: 9/27/2020 8:14:00 PM
Wow! i loved this depiction of human life...how people rise from the scum of life...read all the best of your poems which came into my inbox today.. loved all of them ! God Bless!
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words. Xay sounds like "sign".
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