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The Pigs and the Pine Tree

THE PIGS AND THE PINE TREE Once upon a time, So very long ago, I took my dogs out for a run, Not far from home and so, I thought we would all be fine, Beneath the cooling shadows, Of the trees and bushes, As we ran past field and fallow. The forest was the place for us, Where we might see a deer, And mayhap chase some rabbits, And splash through streams so clear. We loved the forest and the fields, Loved resting in the shade, Of the Pine grove way out back, Where squirrels and wild things played. One day while we hunted there, To see what we might find, We happened on a bunch of pigs, Not tame, the wild kind. Big black tuskers that they were, With humps and slopeing heads. You can't chase them, they won't run, They'll chase you instead. Immediately the dogs gave chase, And just as quickly scattered. I went straight up the nearest tree, Escape was all that mattered. The dogs went home and gathered 'round, The porch and Mama knew, Something was wrong and called the boys, And they were worried too. The dogs went home without me, A sign something was up. They told them, "Go find Judy", The trail was soon picked up. The pigs had gathered 'round the tree, Where I hung and cried, I could hear Mom calling me, Worried what betide, Her wandering girl out in those woods, She sent the boys to find me. Meanwhile the pigs got tired and left, So I came down the Pine tree. My uncles laughed and laughed at me, As they told the story, Of how they found me in the woods, Climbing down a Pine tree. Judy Ball Pine trees don't have limbs. But I climbed it anyway.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/26/2023 9:25:00 AM
I love the visual of this poem. It has moving, action-packed excitement. Bless the verb.
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:16:00 PM
ouch! but they have a lot of pine needles. a very very piece of poetry, really enjoyed it. thank you Judy for your support and for commenting on A Yellow Rose.
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/1/2011 12:19:00 PM
Thank you too my friendfor being so faithful. Glad you enjoyed this little peek at my childhood. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/30/2011 5:14:00 PM
Clever and funny, I never met an aggresive pig though. But you make it likely there could be.
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/30/2011 5:46:00 PM
It's true, pigs can be very aggressive but these were wild razor back hogs. The reason they were waiting at the base of the tree was because they would have eaten me if they could have gotten to me. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/30/2011 7:20:00 AM
LOL, great fun - thanks for sharing, Judy : )
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/30/2011 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/30/2011 3:49:00 AM
Reminds me of a similar situation I was in as a young woman. Very good.
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/30/2011 7:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Juanita. You'll have to put it in verse and post your experience for us. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/29/2011 7:11:00 PM
I think I would have still been there Judy.. u brave girl u.. great tale in poetry and pigs are supposed to be tame and docile right? so glad u made it out of there and shared this rousing poem..luv..
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/29/2011 7:28:00 PM
Not all pigs are docile. They can be quite aggressive. Even the tame ones but the pigs I ran into were wild razor backs. They are the meanest pigs in the world. Not scared of anything and they were waiting for me to come down so they could eat me. Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed this tale from my childhood. God Bless, JB

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