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The Picnic

The sun peeked out from darkened clouds And morning light appeared But soon a thunder clap was loud And rain came as we feared 10/16/2021 Bite Size Poem no23 Line Gauthier, Sponsor

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Date: 11/1/2021 11:15:00 AM
Hi Janis, congratulations on your win! Love this....fabulous imagery! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/24/2021 11:33:00 AM
super imagery, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2021 6:07:00 AM
Janis, lovely poem and congratulations on your win in Line's contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/23/2021 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on this lovely winner, Janis! ...Fran
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Date: 10/22/2021 7:50:00 PM
Dear Janis, your vivid imagery bring me to the center of the soaked picnic scene. Simply splendid! Congratulations for your excellent in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/22/2021 10:14:00 AM
Sounds like a picnic in the northwest! Congratulations on your win Janis! Blessings to you!
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Date: 10/22/2021 3:01:00 AM
Ah! Another picnic ruined... well penned, Janis, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:46:00 PM
Congrats! What matters most is the joy that prevails. God bless you.
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:04:00 PM
Interesting. Though the purpose was affected, the mood is very jovial. Beautiful work!
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Date: 10/21/2021 10:13:00 PM
This is lovely. Congrats on a win
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Date: 10/17/2021 11:52:00 AM
If only the rain washed away the mosquitoes with the ants! Enjoyed! (The Captcha code is "PBS"?)
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