The Piano In Black and White

. Gently caress keys C, E, G__ As butterfly kisses Liatris...

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2011 8:11:00 AM

Well done, Sara! I also don't know what Liatris means, but in any case so nicely written! Have a nice weekend!...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 10:42:00 PM

WEll, except for not knowing what Liatris means. I think this is my favorite of the three! So nice seeing this series tonight, Sara. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/7/2011 5:25:00 PM

Another wonderful write my dear poet friend. If you read "What my eyes see now". Its about the same special friend "our glow" was about. Love your work Sara luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 2:53:00 PM

Knowledgable and creative writing for the contest. Good luck

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/7/2011 12:35:00 PM

Very creative piece, Déirdre

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2011 12:35:00 PM

Fantastic second line, Sara and definite one for the Winners' List! Have a wonderful weekend! Love, Audrey

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/7/2011 12:23:00 PM

Stunning Sara, good luck for the contest ;)

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/7/2011 12:19:00 PM

the worlds favorite cord. john