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Recently at an office Where they check my ailing heart While thumbing through a magazine A photo set apart The timeless snapshot black and white I couldn't turn the page Through watering eyes I looked back To those innocent childhood days It may have been, void of color But certainly not to me Trees were green as springtime grass Skies as blue as seas Rows and rows of fluff white cotton With workers in the field Hand sewn sacks across their backs Most generally overfilled What one couldn't see was clear to me Sensations that I felt I closed my eyes released my mind My heart began to melt Bleeding fingers, unbearable heat Eye burning salty sweat Those moans of hymnals while they worked Things one does not forget Raised in the country in my youth Those fields were all around We'd ride our bikes and watch them pick We loved those soul felt sounds Easily, that photo Could have been, taken by my mother Come to fetch us home to eat Me and my big brother original poem by Daniel Turner "poemdog" 2013

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Date: 2/22/2020 4:58:00 PM
I can see the workers in the fields vividly through your excellent description. The emotions you felt must have added the "color" and enabled you to see clearly these memories you have from childhood. The "bleeding fingers and unbearable heat" show how hard the migrants toiled. I think you should repost this poem, Daniel. Give others a second chance to see it. Amazingly beautiful poem that exhibits your kind heart and compassion. Excellent!
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:56:00 PM
Well since obviously people are reading, I will get the ball rolling. This poem is about migrant workers. Some white, some black and some brown. There was even a short time in my life when I picked cotton. This is not about race as much as it is the passing of an era. Hand picked cotton was shortly thereafter picked with a 16 row cotton picker. Putting thousands of migrant workers out of work. Fond memories:)
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