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The Phantom

The phantom of the opera, In darkness masquerades. A maestro of illusion, In dreams he serenades. While his protegee is sleeping, He speaks of their romance. When love is spurned, she's taken, And given one last chance. Imprisoned; unforsaken, But where, she does not know. Her choice is now between them, The phantom or her beau. One kiss from her he changes, With her promise, when he dies. To return and sing a requiem, And, keep secret where he lies. 11 / 24 / 2016.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2017 8:42:00 PM
Great succinct summary, George - congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/9/2017 3:58:00 PM
What a beauty this is George! I was transported. Congratulations on a deserving win! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:35:00 AM
A 7 for this WINNING poem, George. You've done a great job of summarizing the basic plot of this work in so concise a poem! Thanks for entering my contest! Janice
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Date: 11/27/2016 9:05:00 AM
I'm clapping with enjoyment ... CayCay
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Date: 4/9/2017 12:09:00 PM
Hi CayCay, i am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thankyou for supporting me with your applause. My warmest regards to you. George.
Date: 11/24/2016 8:16:00 AM
Excellent George.
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Date: 4/9/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thankyou Phil, so nice of you to comment so kindly. My regards George.

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