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The Perfect Woman

The perfect woman is both lovely and charming She carries herself with a sophisticated air of feminine grace Gentle and loving and brimful with laughter, Yet showing at times a stubborn streak of strength Not always having the answers, yet knowing her values She is both capable and vulnerable. Perhaps too trusting, placing a limitless faith in God and man, Thus endearing her to those who treasure it and rescue her from her distresses. Possessing a boundless sense of honour and virtue She cleaves to what is good and eschews evil. She tends to be peaceable and tries to please others, Esteeming others as greater than herself -- and being rightly esteemed in return. -- Isaiah Zerbst -- -- Feb 8, 2013 --

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Carrie Richards

Date: 2/14/2013 11:51:00 AM

This is a poem for all women to read, a goal to set our eyes upon. To honor a woman such as you have described would be a joy. Lovely poem to inspire all women

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/12/2013 4:09:00 PM

Isaiah, a superb write! Seems you have the wisdom to recognize and honor a woman of such qualities. This is a beautiful tribute! I am not sure if I thanked you for my placement in your Irish contest but I sincerely thank you since my poem was a bit on the sad side, but I have found sadness and gladness walk hand and hand in Ireland and I just couldn't seem to make it funnier. After reading this poem, I am going to have to make you a favorite poet! Blessings, Lotus

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 2/11/2013 5:08:00 AM

Great! so my stubbornness is not a sin after all. This is a lovely poem Isaiah!

Heather Ober

Date: 2/9/2013 8:54:00 PM

Wow, the qualities you have described are all very admirable. I hope you have or will find this perfect woman! :) "Brimful with laughter" - love that!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:20:00 AM

wow, I think you nailed it!! Good prose description, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 AM

Aptly expressed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Must be a contest if so, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit..Your stop is greatly appreciated..Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/9/2013 8:39:00 AM

I d love to be that perfect woman MrI..To be as your poem describes Jolly..gentle loving..thinking the best of others..Being stubborn..that comes naturally to me i guess..lol;).Most of all id lovto be faithful to God.You described a woman so well.A perfect man would be a man who inderstands a woman s mind and that s not an easy taskB-).I read lots of your poetry cos i love it.Well done