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The Perfect Rose

The well worn path, Familiar with my footprints My secret place to hide n seek An old gazebo adorned in a riot of wild roses The sweet fragrance fills my soul Peaceful; time is not cruel here. Yellow daffodils, violets, pink peonies, red rose Birds on a wire chatter their woes Restless.... seeking.... I wander aimlessly.... Overgrown path and untamed jungle standing tall against the odds Awaiting my obscured fate Thorns, thistles and brambles Feral beasts lie in wait to devour so.... Why do I always seek the perfect rose amongst the thistles?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/15/2016 12:21:00 PM
It is worth the perfect rose, the pain of the hunt, I enjoyed this :)
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 7/16/2016 5:24:00 AM
Yes, it was! Thank you for your time to read and comment! Appreciated!
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 7/15/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate the time to read and comment!

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