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The Perfect Prayer

THE PERFECT PRAYER I was leading the service at church Sunday night. We were deep in the throes of a spiritual fight. The preacher was gone, emotions ran high. My first thought was no, but I knew I must try. When it came time to pray, I wasn’t prepared. I was feeling the pressure as everyone stared. In searching my mind for guiding direction, my wondering eyes made an easy connection. He was a principled man who never said much. Most knew him for his compassionate touch. Before I could weigh all the risks it involved, I had asked him to pray, my problem was solved. He reluctantly agreed with a nervous little smile, then started in, “God…” and paused for a while. He struggled intently for words to compose. As each moment passed, the room-tension rose. A silent prayer, not what I first had in mind, but we all had one going for words he could find. A long awkward silence; I had counted to ten, when he finally yelled, "Help!" and a quiet, "Amen." Laughter burst out over what had occurred. He summed up our anguish with one masterful word. This spirit-filled man, I had put on the spot, had patiently waited for the answer he sought. Our healing began from that heartfelt plead. When we give it to God, He knows just what we need. With hope now replacing any thoughts of despair, I thanked him for praying the perfect prayer. The Perfect Prayer was based on a true experience I had at a high-school youth retreat. The scenario was slightly different, the impact was the same. This piece, one of my favorites, has been published in several publications. Sometime, I think, we make prayer too complicated.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 2:21:00 PM
as to rhyme & God's wishes dear...there are many many forms using rhyme let me help you & me to explore them...I have just been told when we do aabbccdd we are doing COUPLET form...so you lay out these lines in groups of 2. Okies back to the content (PS I have been doing this wrong for decades LOL) Well guess what..other that its a COUPLET I have NO corrections!!! Tadadadaaaaaa
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Date: 4/22/2010 10:36:00 AM
very nice and welcome to poetry soup enjoyed faleshia
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:13:00 PM
I enjoyed hearing of the experience.
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Date: 4/20/2010 1:24:00 PM
Wonderful use of rhyme to share this experience. Blessings to you for sharing your poem with us. You may want to reclassify it under rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/20/2010 10:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the amazing poetry you presented to us today Kevin. Thank you for sharing it and may you have a day full of love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/20/2010 6:49:00 AM
A fine expressive poem
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Date: 4/20/2010 6:01:00 AM
This youth's cry for "help" reflected the spirit of many people's prayers. Very often, we pray petitioning God for assistance. And I think prayers of thanks are most welcome when He responds to our requests. Indeed, "When we give it to God, He knows just what we need." You appear to have a beautiful soul, Kevin. Keep up the fine work and welcome to Poetry Soup. You'll find many people of faith here. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2010 5:37:00 AM
Nice, smiles with this read, have yourself a good one p.d.
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