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The Perfect Painting

Brown and black hues Tattered rags Whimpering cries A baby suckling Through the torn shirt A woman looking starved Trying to feed her baby Right there Beside that alley Eyes dimmed with sorrow No sparkle in anything Trying to cover her baby With her tattered stole Only bright colour Her love for her kid Framed this painting Is now on a wall of my mind A perfect painting That moves my heart Every now and then Could melt million hearts Every now and then.... Dated....16-5-2014

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Date: 10/27/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thinking of you, I hope you are well.
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:38:00 PM
Long time no see, I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 2/20/2016 1:34:00 PM
bhat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/2/2015 7:54:00 AM
You are missed!
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:09:00 AM
Hello Irfana, I am not sure if you celebrate Christmas but I wanted to wish you the best in this season of Love.
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:10:00 PM
Touched my heart - congrats on your win
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:56:00 PM
I enjoyed the unique direction you took with your entry, Irfana. What could be more perfect than seeing a woman trying to provide as best she could for her child? Congratulations on your success in the contest! Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:28:00 PM
Hi Irfana, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:40:00 PM
Irfana, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:28:00 PM
this one unique write of the theme but it is full of sadness and love.. Congratulations...!!!, olive eloisa
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Date: 6/10/2014 12:55:00 PM
Brilliant write - congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/10/2014 12:05:00 PM
congrats Irvana , loved it ...Seren
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Date: 5/16/2014 3:33:00 PM
This is so sad and real. It is a sad reality for to many women. You bring attention that is much needed.
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