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The Perfect Painting

I am walking in the sunshine. I am feeling the breeze. I am talking to a stranger. Scenes that changes constantly. I was a victim of a tsunami. The ocean came ashore. The wind blew furiously. Many cities were destroyed. Perfect paintings are on display. The Art Museum is open today. A vase filled with roses is the centerpiece. The table is covered beautifully. Standing by window is a cat. The carpet is torn and water was spilled. A collection so hone hangs from the wall. The arrangement makes a statement of perfection. The cathedral is scenic to the countryside. A theme of artistic representation canvas defines. The congregation has gather outside. The discussion of the viewers is hype. All enjoyed this compendium. Several paintings sold for millions. _________________________________| Penned May 14, 2014! For The perfect painting contest!

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Date: 6/12/2014 9:06:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/12/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Debbie. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 8:09:00 PM
I loved the contrast - congrats on your win
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 8:28:00 PM
Thanks Aberfoyle. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 5:37:00 PM
you are welcome...
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:53:00 PM
Dear Verlena, How frightening it must have been to witness a tsunami coming ashore! Of course, you may have meant this in a metaphorical sense. Still, thinking of the damage water can cause to "perfect paintings," is very sad. (Just received a DVD of the movie "Hereafter" and it begins with a tsunami. Amazing film. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Carolyn
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 3:27:00 PM
Verlena,, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thanks PD. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 2:40:00 PM
Verlena, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Skat. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 2:11:00 PM
Wow that's awesome Verlena ! Congrats on a perfect win !
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Upma for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 1:12:00 PM
those paintings are wow!. :) i can see each canvass with your words.... :) nice COngratulations!, OLive Eloisa
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Olive. Verlena
Date: 6/10/2014 12:03:00 PM
well done Verbena many congrats ....Seren
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/10/2014 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Seren. Verlena

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