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The Perfect Moment

I just had a moment When the window was open I smelled the fresh air It was a feeling I couldn’t bare I was sitting on my bed With my hands to my head I began to cry You probably want to know why The tears that role down my face The feeling of pain is not the case The effects of my tears is Joy What is the cause of this story? Have you ever felt the moment when everything is right? When your muscles aren’t tight When you have the greatest friends And the perfectly cool winds When the perfects guy sweeps you off your feet It’s like the perfect feeling of spring heat No to cold and not to hot The perfect moment is what I just caught

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Date: 6/22/2010 7:58:00 AM
I love this. It takes me back to the days when I was younger. Carry these perfect moments with you always. Make sure that as you get older you hang on to this feeling, and let it drive you. I love you sweetheart. Thank you for sharing this. Mom
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:12:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Emily. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:08:00 PM
beautiful the way you describe your gripping moment of your perfect moment, sweet write..P.D.
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