The Perfect Facebook Life

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Some Facebook friends seem to have a perfect life, A perfect husband, perfect family, no stress or strife. I wonder how many lives are problem free… Are they really that happy and carefree? My life isn’t perfect, but I try to make the most of each day, Trying to enjoy my life before I am old and gray. God only gives you so much time on earth before you die… Then the faithful will have a perfect life in a mansion in the sky.

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 5/22/2016 6:34:00 AM

Yes Brenda, you might say...... I am one of those with a "Perfect Life" but I'm under constance stress of someday losing it..lol

Robert Heemstra

Date: 5/21/2016 5:31:00 PM

I haven't done much Facebook, but I do understand where you're coming from. Growing up my mother would always tell my sister and me, we're nothing like our cousins and how well behaved they our compared to us. Believe me the grass isn't always greener on the other side! Great write!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 5/21/2016 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Robert.I think you are right, it's not always greener elsewhere!