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The Pendulum Ends

My mangling of words begins again, I chain up syllables and thrash them with punctuation, the pendulum sways. Twisting them into emotion, stitching them together to offer to you, the pendulum swings. Severed letters pile on the bloody floor, keeping only the oozing essence of the body I lay them, quivering, on the page, the pendulum slows. They beg you to read them (save them) but they can expect a lifetime of torture until I lay with my dark mistress in my earthly bed. The pendulum ends. (Revision of Untitled 93862)

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Date: 9/11/2017 1:55:00 PM
Another intensely honest piece. Again, you take the reader with you.
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Mark Matthews
Date: 9/11/2017 3:57:00 PM
Again thank you, it means alot that you took the time to go through some of my other poems, I'm in a kind of a dark place right now, if you couldn't tell lol, I will make an effort to go through some of your work soon
Date: 10/29/2008 9:50:00 AM
thank you for your kind words on bloodred, I love this poem too. you are very talented.
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Date: 10/26/2008 12:17:00 PM
Love it!!!! L!S@
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Date: 10/3/2008 12:54:00 PM
Yuch and I mean that in the best possible way! The sway of this piece is strong. Thank you and thank you for your wonderful comments.
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