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The Pebble

The Pebble The green pebble dances in a wild sea, the superb moonbeam mirrors my ragged soul . the silent brook caresses a night flower. .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2024 12:38:00 PM

by the way, this one has excellent imagery.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2024 12:37:00 PM

well, I've seen at least three poems for today. I am starting at the bottom and working my way up. This one is nearly error free, but since you used periods in the last two sentences, you should also change comma to period in line 3. If I help revise longer poems, I will do it in Soupmail.

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/27/2024 3:44:00 PM

Thank you very much , my dear friend . Andrea Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/19/2022 3:13:00 PM

Hello Mulu, This is a lovely poem. I read it twice. Enjoy your evening my friend. Merry /Christmas.Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/20/2022 11:04:00 AM

Hello Mulu, You are welcome. Thank you. Blessings to you. Mulu.

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 12/19/2022 8:45:00 PM

Hello Darlene,thank you for the lovely comment.Be blessed Darlene!!