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The Pebble

Millennia ago it started as a rock that was about the size of a fist. It got swept to the edge lodging against two mighty bounders. Staying there for a century or two it was finally small enough to escape. Tumbling down the face of the fall it landed at its shingle coated base. For many years at least five hundred it was tossed and rolled and polished. Now the size and shape of an egg it glistened and sparkled in sunlight. Finally washed out it headed seaward coming to rest on a sandy beach. Where it was found and treasured by a child who saw its magic and lore.

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Date: 10/17/2018 9:24:00 AM
A beautifully mystical tale.
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Date: 4/11/2018 1:13:00 PM
Natural life story of a pebble. Nicely composed. Enjoyed each line.
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Date: 4/9/2018 10:10:00 PM
I like this! What an interesting way to describe the journey and transformation.
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:13:00 PM
This is a lovely way to describe how it got so small, Shadow! A good model for what you want in your challenge.
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:10:00 PM
Love looking through rocks at a local restaurant with my grandson. We finish eating earlier than other family members and on warm days, I take him outside to explore. Lovely piece, I will adapt it to a story to tell him sometime.
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Date: 3/27/2018 4:59:00 PM
Shadow, I love the story you told of the pebble's journey through time and space, facing the elements and erosion till it finally landed in its final destination - treasured in a child's hands. Oh, the stories this pebble could tell... A fantastic poem with beautiful heart! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/30/2018 3:01:00 AM
ty for your visit glad you enjoyed it hugs
Date: 3/27/2018 4:38:00 PM
Nicely written Shadow. I enjoyed it and the special ending too :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/30/2018 3:03:00 AM
ty Heidi your visit is appreciated pleased that you enjoyed it hugs

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