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The Pearl

The moon was a pearl - a large white brilliant pearl of a moon precious like the one I adored as it shone down on us from the sky. The sky was a sea - a broad expanse of midnight blue as deep as the love we made deep in a night swimming with shimmering myriads of stars. And the stars were fish - beautiful shimmering star-fish as bright as the glow in his eyes - those eyes that gazed into mine deep into the night of the beautiful sky - that broad expanse of midnight blue - the sea into which we gazed so deeply in love as the moon met our gaze - the moon that shone down on me and my love most precious - Oh, night of the large, white brilliant moon - the pearl. 3/11/13 For Mark Toney's '2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 12' Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/29/2022 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! I just floated through your romantic layers of images and alliteration! So beautiful! Blessings.
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:56:00 PM
Dear Andrea, it was such a joy to return to read this romantic gem once again. So beautiful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea..... ! Congratulations on your great win in the Marathon contest!
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:02:00 AM
Glad to see you garner a win with this "gem". Really liveky to read it again. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:02:00 AM
What beautiful poetry, Andrea! "The moon was a pearl"... "The sky was a sea"... "And the stars were fish". You shared your precious, imaginative upside-down moment with us and ignited our memories of years gone by. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 12 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started!
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:14:00 PM
thank you so very much. This one is such a special poem to me.
Date: 8/26/2022 7:56:00 AM
Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
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Date: 2/8/2020 9:04:00 PM
You have a gift for seeing the same nature that the rest of us see, but with new poetic eyes. Here the sky is turned upside down and contains the elements of a great sea. Such an amorous write as well. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/3/2017 6:55:00 PM
Back for congrats!
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:47:00 PM
This one has brought you to a winner's list again. Well done!
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:35:00 PM
Hi Andrea, how passionate and beautiful this poem is! A fav for me. Congratulations :)
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Date: 8/3/2017 3:25:00 PM
Coming back with congrats - glad to see this one again.
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:21:00 PM
Stunning, dreamlike, love it! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:25:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea! Sweetly worded!
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Date: 7/14/2017 8:22:00 AM
a lusty romp into the metaphoric depths of love.....congrats Andrea....
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Date: 7/13/2017 8:01:00 PM
This is fantastic, Andrea - I adore it! I wrote a poem a while ago (To Sail the Sky) which had a similar theme - turning the sky and sea upside-down. When I was little my mom and I would lie on the floor, legs up in a chair to relax, heads tilted back, and imagined we were living in the house upside-down, stepping over the doorways, etc., so I've always viewed the world in "odd" ways, lol. This is just perfect, in my opinion - have to fav! (I'm spending a day on your page sometime soon!). :-)
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Date: 7/13/2017 8:03:00 AM
Wow, this is stunning. I love how all your images weave together into one painting.
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Date: 7/13/2017 6:16:00 AM
This was a pleasure to read, I never read your older poems, thanks for posting this oldie but goodie, congrats on another win!
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Date: 4/7/2013 8:15:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery. - Red
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:13:00 AM
hi sweetest Andrea.. just dropping by to wish you a very Happy Easter <3 and i found this piece so amazing.. enjoyed so much <3 much love and lights <3 Sk
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Date: 3/27/2013 9:42:00 PM
Nicely done on this wonderful poem. Romance and spring is in the air. love phyl
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Date: 3/27/2013 4:57:00 PM
Andrea, this is lovely. congrats on the winning poem~SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2013 4:21:00 AM
Many Congrats Andy love and many hugs xx
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:40:00 PM
Andrea congratulation on your win. I love the imagery and the metaphor. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/22/2013 5:49:00 PM
Lovely night of pearl's Andrea, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:32:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
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