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The Path of Redemption

I always wished it was easy to acquire happiness, but it’s moments like the one I’m facing, that strengthens my emotions and builds my character. Nothing is appreciated nor gained from easiness. It’s the difficulties of this situation, that brings out the best in me, while taking me closer to my joy. So in reality…with all the twists and turns, I pass ’round those rumored curves, letting the path guide me through the unknown, Knowing this desolate heart, will be lead back to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 7:23:00 AM
This is so nice. I enjoyed reading it so much. Love Scarlett
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:24:00 PM
Very creative and interesting thoughts you have penned so well on Redemption, Raul. How is it you are not much seen on PS,
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Date: 10/4/2010 2:48:00 PM
Lovely lines Raul and whimsical expressions in your free verse... sometimes our paths take turns we do not expect ...some road lead back to the beginning... its all about karma.. and luv..
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:10:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:53:00 AM
Good morning, Raul the truth is thought provoking. Happines builds many strong characters whithin. Enjoyed the ending,..p.d.
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