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The Path

Green mist passes before my eyes tinting everything an emerald hue, clinging to the ends of my fur as I run through this gauntlet of streets. Blades of conformity lash at me trying to cut away my individuality, and weighted balls of suppression try to knock me in line. Deftly I dodge each thrust and blow heading forward without a destination, just trying to survive. Walls drop in changing my path, slowing my progress but not stalling it. A hunger starts to eat at me and I chew on my arm to quell it. I crawl through the mire of depression and time becomes nonexistent as I struggle to be free. Once I’m out I shake off my coat and start my trek anew. (When the physical doesn’t work) the ghosts of my past are released, they float towards me with severed limbs, severed hearts, and severed souls all trying to touch me, make me relive their pains that I created. Twisting and turning Matrix style I evade their seditious advances, spinning and contorting to fit through the narrowing chambers. On all fours I continue picking up speed as the slandering alley cuts off the wind, gaining just enough to spring over the spiked pit threatening to impale me. I hit the ground in a roll and slide to the wall breathing heavily, looking toward my future path. I see it doesn’t end, so this is how it’s to be, continuous traps and pitfalls. The trick is to enjoy surpassing them, take time to reflect, that’s the secret the world hides.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/23/2009 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Mark and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations Mark on your poem going to the 2nt round. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:25:00 AM
Mark,Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Mark! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/12/2009 4:44:00 PM
.... and Slow Down ... LOL ... your write here had me breathless by the end ... smile ... wonderful selection to be featured this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/12/2009 4:10:00 PM
Dear Mark, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM " The Path " Running over, under, around, and through the Pitfalls of Life Superb Presentation Enjoyed the read ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:30:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mark. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 1:02:00 PM
Hi Mark, enjoyed your feature poem this week, congrats! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 11/10/2008 5:50:00 PM
bravo great pen
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Date: 10/29/2008 10:20:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Nice use of imagery and personifications to forward your thoughts. Just remember, where there is life there is hope. Keep on writing! Karen
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