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The Patch

We live in the Patch, our own little town Got a grocery store and three bars We got a row of shanties, company owned Ain’t got much space to park our cars Yous guys got it made so don’t be complainin’ Workin’ out in all that sunshine We gotta load 16 tons to make a livin’ Can’t breathe too good down in the mine. We ain’t doin’ too bad from pay to pay Barely make the bills and no damn more Ernie was right when he sang that song About owin’ our soul to the company store. Got me a couple of kids and a good woman Wednesday afternoon and Sundays I get some rest Not much pay, but a honest days work Livin’ in America, we sure are blessed. Billy was hurt over in number eleven Ain’t gonna make it in to work today Gotta stop over and see him before I go in Check on his kids, make sure they’re okay Gotta get goin’ now, give me a hug Gonna stop for a few on my way home too Take Billy over some of your fried chicken Ask Mary if there’s anything else we can do. Livin’ in the Patch, not much changes Got good neighbors and a place to lay your head Work hard, play hard and damn proud of it We sleep pretty good when we go to bed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2011 5:38:00 AM
A good write, and one that I can identify with...I never worked in a mine, but I spent almost 40 years working in factories and warehouses, bending my back and lifting heavy loads. A poignant poem.
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Date: 10/7/2009 1:55:00 AM
You paint a very vivid picture of many of the little towns that make America. You are a great writier my friend, Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/1/2009 7:15:00 AM
You know Vince I just love your poetry it always seems to take me back home to my grandparents house - Thank you Vince for your support and encouragement/ friendship these last few years - My life is really taking off in wonderful directions in fact - it can only brighten from here - Love & Respects to you Vince - God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/30/2009 2:28:00 PM
Makes me tink of the Coal camp here in Nigeria.U bring out creativity out of simplicity.cheers!
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Date: 9/26/2009 2:22:00 PM
Sounds like the good old days Vince, where poor people has poor ways. I remember some saw mill days in my youth. When the day's work was done, sleep was fun. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/23/2009 12:02:00 PM
Wonderful poem Vince, this was a delight to read>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 1:07:00 PM
People who work hard, play hard, who are good neighbors, and take care of their responsibilites are the true heart of what makes a good country. Earthy, salty, and real down to earth poetry!! :) great job, Vince! ~ God Bless..Carrie
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:53:00 AM
hard work always gives a good night sleep! Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2009 10:30:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Vince. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 9:15:00 AM
Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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