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The Pastel Portrait

An old man looks deeply into my soul His piercing blue eyes disquietingly seek What is written there on my life scroll, An accomplished man of purpose, meek. A fine pastel she has lovingly sketched Another time, another place he and I, Likely over a beer, would’ve kvetched On many topics, oft seeing eye to eye. I would’ve respected his keen insight He has the look of one who is worthy, Man of his word, his lips pressed tight Hard-working he is, so clearly earthy. I think he might have been a seafarer Comfortably draped in a gray slicker, I suspect that he speaks with a burr Bright, quick-witted, not one to bicker. Written June 6, 2022 Submitted to "The Pastel" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 6/9/2022 1:17:00 AM
I love this line the best - reminds me of your Daddy "I think he might have been a seafarer"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/9/2022 8:47:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I really like the pastel a lot. I wouldn't mind having it hanging somewhere in my house, if I had any wall left to hang something.
Date: 6/6/2022 1:54:00 PM
This is excellent and imaginative, Milton: I looked at it and went blank. Good Luck in the contest. Best, SuZ
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Date: 6/6/2022 3:16:00 PM
That was my reaction at first, SuZ, but I mulled it over and decided this was the best approach for me. We'll see. Think on it.

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