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The Past

Ever since I was a little kid, I have always wanted to do more then my parents did. After my mom split and left town My dad was never around. I promised my self life would not be like this anymore. With the fighting and slamming of the doors. I decided to go back to school once more, For this is what I thought would help me get my foot in the door. Now that I have only 24 credits more to get, I will have my bachelors degree yet. It has been a long hard struggle for me, ever since my parents abandon me But the one thing I have learned all these years later is that life will never be the same as it once was. I'm all grown up with a family of my own, And I know my kids will always want to come home. Now for once I have the family I've always wanted Ever since I was that little girl trying to stand on her own two feet.. "When" contest--- Paula Swanson

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Date: 5/5/2011 6:45:00 AM
Intense feel on this theme.Congrats Cory on your win with this very toughing write. love,Gautami
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congrats Cory on a fine win!!
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:07:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win, Cory : )
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:34:00 PM
Wonderful piece, congrats on your HM :o)
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Cory. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:40:00 AM
Congrats Cory on your HM in Paula's contest with this fantastic write my friend.. wow ..good job luv.. let us enjoy our HM's together for excellence ....
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Cory in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:21:00 PM
This is really a touching approach to the challenge, Cory-- beautiful how you grew stronger from your past and how you turned things around-- way to go for being in the winners' list :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:52:00 PM
Cory, this is sweet and heartfelt. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:17:00 PM
reflections of the past, will forever last. this life that you led has made you stronger for your present family and that's the way that it should be.
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:30:00 PM
great insight into the early days of your life Cory.. some sad moments with the fighting and slamming of doors.. stressful for kids to endure luv..but look at u now a sweet poetess and entertaining us all with your wonderful words ..thankxx for sharing luv..
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:02:00 AM
l LIKE THIS POEM. I FEEL YOU. I KIND OF HAD A ROUGH CHILDHOOD TOO.
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