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the passion

    in the heat of her
 passion myself produced
    geysers of life.

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  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:55:00 PM
    A very stong haiku.. enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 12:36:00 AM
    My imagination, went to a lot, of romantic places. This haiku is the hottest, I have ever read!

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 10:04:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 6:04:00 AM
    Very descriptive work here...I was gladden at your presence at my work "He Brushed"...Your comments lifted my spirits..Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2010 12:32:00 PM
    this is a steamy write it says so much in so few words... thanks for your generous comment... yes that piece that you commented on is nostalgic

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 8:42:00 AM
    Good imagery as well my friend short and concise loving it here.

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 4:32:00 PM
    poignant...poignant indeed !....hint--> 'Flower' in my writes, are always in referance to a female...unless I specify. Much love, james

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Good imagery, HOnesty!

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 7:39:00 AM
    Geysers of Life indeed HONESTY.. u have captured the essence of luv and passion in a few words so sweet and intense at the same time... awesome luv.. happy weekend...

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 5:51:00 AM
    I enjoyed this haiku this evening.Powerful emotions.Thank you for commenting on my poem.Fabiyas