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The Park

The shadows cast from childhood’s grace, From oaks once climbed with wondered zeal, Still gently shade the heart’s chaste place. A park where myths and dreams were real, So long as thoughts remained puerile - Imagination’s grass strewn stage. Unchecked these shadows wane with age, As grownup winds strip bare the trees, Yet memories can still – assuage; A canopy of youth’s reprise. Rhyme – ababbccdcd French form - 8 syllables per line

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Date: 2/21/2016 10:03:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win david.
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:49:00 AM
I like the form you chose for yours and the development of your theme. Congrats for your win, David.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:34:00 PM
David, Congratulations on your awesome win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your win with this perfect Dizain, David. Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:40:00 PM
very good example of this dizain form. I hope you do well in the contest!
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:40:00 PM
An interesting form which I have yet to tackle. So true that with increasing age, it is only the memories that can take us back to our youth. // paul
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