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Reads 'Tiny', Fox Terrier, died March 12th 1891, aged 16 years. A true friend to those she could trust'

 

At top of pillar, Mister Potts.....

 

 

...and how could a kid resist such a crossing........

 

...unless you had a boat? (Brittanic) Me and little bro, 1968.

 

My park to me was not see-saws nor swings instead, a treasure chest of stranger things. A marble grave, 1891, well kept where 'Tiny', estate owner's dog now slept. The long gone Manor House front Portico and where the star struck teenage lovers go holds carvings, some initials, from the past though in one case someone had left their last. Script ' E Potts joined navy 1943' Did such detail writ mean 'remember me'? So many times I've gazed upon his name that plea cut deep in stone it's power retains. His call over the years still engraved there since boyhood I have offered up a prayer. The culvert is a concrete tour de force too tempting for adventurers, of course. Amphitheatre for screaming, scary, in heavy rain, tomb for the unwary. Mill races, lock gates, tunnels, falls and weirs all testing grounds for our deep darkest fears. There was no challenge our band could resist we cocked a snook, and nature raised a fist. Returning home, triumphant, green with moss, in trouble, but we didn't give a toss. The moment was our game and joy the prize, such treasure blind to all but children's eyes. Seek us out, the park was where you found us, Green fields of innocence, it's magic bound us. Feb 14th 2016 For contest 'The Park', sponsored by Craig Cornish.

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Date: 2/20/2016 10:18:00 AM
Your unique take on this theme is indeed magical, Viv. I'd rather have had fun in a place like this than on the swings. You narrate with ability, and you took me along with you...a pleasure to read. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:28:00 AM
This is RICH...rich with wonder Viv and a joy to read. Sure to do well in the contest. #7
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thanks Connie, everything nowadays seems to have cushions and padding- all health and safety. Not much left for little adventurers. Viv x
Date: 2/14/2016 10:44:00 PM
What an intriguing park, Viv. Your story telling ability is so well done, it really takes one into your world! GL in the contest :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 6:59:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, it has all the usual kid's stuff, but being an old Manor estate there is much history, and much to explore. And, being a kid, it was twice the size it is now I'm a grown-up. Viv x
Date: 2/14/2016 5:15:00 PM
Interesting memories, Viv, and an engaging write.
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Date: 2/15/2016 6:59:00 AM
Thanks, James, I still get total recall on infrequent visits. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/14/2016 2:20:00 PM
Wow! I feel like I have been there after reading your very vivid portrait. It has left a lasting image in my mind. Elaine
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Date: 2/15/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine, very kind comments. Viv x
Date: 2/14/2016 1:12:00 PM
what a wonderful time you must have had..better than any civilized park..haha. BG
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Date: 2/15/2016 7:01:00 AM
Too much health and safety nowadays, Barbara, kids can't be kids anymore. Thanks for dropping by, Viv x
Date: 2/14/2016 12:44:00 PM
- All that was exciting and "illegal" ..... curious children - A great writing, Viv - Good luck in the contest - Happy Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 7:02:00 AM
Much climbing, paddling, almost drowning, cuts and bruises- just an ordinary playday back then, Anne Lise. Takk, Viv x
Date: 2/14/2016 11:54:00 AM
Your park sounds like more fun than see-saws and swings. Did you ever look up the name, E. Potts? Your writes are always entertaining, Viv.
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Date: 2/15/2016 7:03:00 AM
We've tried a bit of research, since one of my neighbours noticed the inscription and has tried to find out. Will let you know. Thanks for popping by, Lin. Viv x

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