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The Park

the park is nice in winter, the park is nice in spring the park is really, really fun, especially the swing it swings you high up in the sky and makes you nearly fly but I am always sad when mum says "say goodbye" I dream about the park at home, I dream about it at school I think about all the trees and the seesaw, it is cool I puts me up and down, over and over again but it always breaks my heart when mum say "time to go Ken" I dream about the park in bed, I dream about it outside but I no that tomorrow after school, I will get another ride

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Date: 2/13/2016 11:59:00 PM
Hi Carmen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:58:00 PM
Enjoyable park, I also walked in that blond afternoon, and stopoed near the statue of waiting the good tomorrow.
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:09:00 AM
Carmen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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