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The Parable of the Talents

A distinguished rich man went abroad, Entrusting his slaves with his fortune. The goal to increase what each had received; One got five, one got two, one got one. To augment the master’s great wealth, The diligent ones worked so hard. They doubled their goods as best that they could. But the slack one, alas, was a coward. Time passed and the master returned His assets to reclaim on that day. Well done faithful ones, my esteem you have won. Wicked slave, you‘re a disgrace, go away. The master then gave the rewards To his servants who did loyal deeds. In the Kingdom they’ll reign, to do more of the same, And bring blessings to those who give heed. THE PARABLE OF THE TALENTS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Holly Hippocampus Submitted October 3, 2018

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Date: 11/7/2018 3:09:00 PM
Certainly enjoyed this one, Susan...I don't know exactly why, but I was reminded of King Lear a bit. (But just a bit, mind you, as the outcome there was so different, of course). Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/28/2018 3:24:00 AM
Hello Susan ... your adage on loyalty gives hope to many who strive to better themselves - thank you Susan - Lindsay
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Susan Palli
Date: 10/29/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thanks so much for your feedback, Laurie. Have a great day.
Date: 10/12/2018 6:54:00 AM
it pays to be loyal my friend, I have enjoyed your poem today, have a blessed day.
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Susan Palli
Date: 10/29/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Pixie! Have a great day!
Date: 10/3/2018 10:52:00 AM
Lovely take on this parable Susan, excellently penned indeed, a blessed read. Have blessed day, Gordon
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Susan Palli
Date: 10/29/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thanks again for your nice comments, Gordon

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