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The Paper

She writes some words 'pon the paper Examines them Then she writes one more word Tears run down her cheeks She crumples the paper Letting it drop to the floor With it the pen falls, ink spilling mixed with tears Staining the paper upon the floor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/22/2013 5:08:00 PM
Sara, i like the words she ponders on paper... Very sad, how sometimes paper engraves our deepest feelings... Sending hugs.. Linda
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:19:00 PM
I just love this Sara, ~:) Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2013 8:24:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful and moving! I have been there before. I actually felt like I was reading a poem of my own! I loved it and I am adding it to my favorites! Terrific work, Sara!...Thank you so much for the kind visit! :)
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Date: 11/21/2013 5:17:00 PM
Sara ~ thanks for your comments. I like the 'pon ~ and from your photo you will write what you feel! Keep in touch! Paula Larson
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:49:00 PM
Wow, what an outstanding write my friend! This is a phenomenal poem here Sara! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/21/2013 12:42:00 PM
- Touching poem Sara - beautiful work! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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